Cara ficou incrível, direção de arte está ótima, e a escrita é praticamente perfeita, o mesmo vale pela escolha da trilha sonora, tudo combina perfeitamente, espero que todos envolvidos no projeto estejam orgulhosos, ficou lindo
Ohh, this was amazing. <3 Does someone know what the paths are? Initially, I played a sarcastic type of character, then a really sweet and insecure one and then a hardass that was obsessed with discipline.
I really love the writing! I was super immersed and invested in the attention to detail. I really, really love the amount of effort going into the choices feeling consistent and varied. I really love how the lore and the world building builds on top of each other without breaking the flow of the narrative. I absolutely love the grayscale coloring as well, my eyes were practically dancing over the designs in the background and characters. It's awesome.
im on the second chapter so far and im loving it but i cant stop laughing cuz 'mandra' is kinda like.. p\/ssy in russian. anyways! mathias is cute and i love that we can be pissed at him (also the way he kinda delivers if u keep provoking him in chap 1???? delicious)
ngl matt be funky flustered mess and then something happens and the only clear thought in my head is 'daddy is daddying' LIKE WHEN WE YELLED AND HE MADE US KNEEL after the nightmare??????????? DAYMN.
anyways i loved it, mattie is my fav so far, i didnt try other paths, the pictures and aesthetic are fire and im sending all love well wishes and hopes for the update!
Just noticed a bug. After choosing my dragon commanders appearance in game, a short time later his appearance on the save menu where it usually shows is different from what I chose - he has a different nose & different jawline. Not sure why this happened? Also, in the first part of the game, if you try to quicksave it gives an error and you need to rollback. Not sure at what point this stops but after Matt visits the dragon commander in their bedroom, the error no longer occurs.
Hi! Just wanted to report an error in the Windows version! It's during basically the first chapter, right after the talk with the Queen, the scene where you can help Mathias undress, it stops playing as this message pops up!
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/chapterOne.rpy", line 654, in script
label c1dulcereward:
File "game/chapterOne.rpy", line 654, in script
label c1dulcereward:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1427, in execute
screen notify(message):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1427, in execute
screen notify(message):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1432, in execute
frame at notify_appear:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1433, in execute
text "{font=GrenzeGotisch.ttf}{size=20}[mn1][message!tq][mn2]{/size}{/font}"
Just did my first run and even created an account, so far I'm impressed. I'll try a few different choices later, but so far choices have been frequent, made sense for the characters and didn't leave me wanting for different options, I'm a bit bummed about not being able to tell on Mandra, but oh well...
I don't mind the black and white aesthetic and the frequent art shots (scenes or whatcha call it) mere then make up for the lack of colour. I do want to point out that the art style is quite charming.
All in all a great VN! But If I could ask one thing, MC has long hair cos of the queen, will we be able to at some point chooses to cut it? Idk why that's the thing I'd love to see, but it is.
So i had been playing this game for about 5 hours and there was this choice i couldnt get no matter how many different choices i get it was the 'Be obedient' and i couldnt press it cause my MC was always to proud any tips would be great or i might spend the whole week fixated on this
Hi! Thank you so much for playing the game! I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^^ That scene at the end of CH02 changes a little bit depending on your MC's archetype/personality. That option only appears to the Ruler archetype. It's supposed to be always locked to show that your MC just can't bring themself to be obedient to Mathias (yet) hehe ^^ <3 There are similar options in the other routes too, but for different aspects of the MC's personality. If you want to play other archetypes, you can get the Seeker archetype (sweeter MC) from the first choices in the menus, while the Destroyer (outspoken MC) options are often in the middle. Each archetype has a different ending in CH02. :3
This is such an amazing story, i was sooo invested!! no wait, I AM so invested!!! like seriously the characters are amazing, the story is super interesting, the art is georgous!
i really hope that the second part of chapter 3 comes out :0 IT WAS JUST ALL TOO GOOD AAAAHGGHGHAGHGDGHS i'm gonna go feral
it's a really nice change from all of the Visual Novels i see! the posibility of choosing how you feel of most things, the incredible artwork, the way the story is seriously unique, it's all just too amazing!! The extra story was great too!! I honestly hope to see a future update :)
I made an account just so I could leave a comment lol, I really love this game and the character's you've created! I'm so excited to see where this goes in the future (though I'm very new to using itch.io so I literally have no idea how to navigate this site lmao). I love all the LGBTQ+ representation too, super nice to see :)
I was pleasantly surprised when I heard Gnossienne in your wonderful work. You have chosen the music perfectly for the story. The storytelling style, musical accompaniment and graphic performance are all very sophisticated and harmonize perfectly. Thank You for sharing your amazing work.
This was such an amazing game! I just kinda wish Mandra was a possible love interest lol. I am so excited for the other chapters/updates! I love the story and the angst so far. Thank you devs for creating such a lovely game <33
Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥ And I do have plans for Mand after this game, so I'm extra glad you liked them so much. >8))) It's just me, one dev, though haha
Oh my god, i really hope you're resting then! Don't pressurize urself for games especially because its just you, really surprised bc its an amazing game and doing it all by yourself is an accomplishment 😭 Thank you again, and really?? I'm so happy about the plan for Mand :D
This was a fun play! I really enjoyed it. I got a good little kick out of the use of "Battle of Trees" - Tori Amos instramental during the flashback of the feast before the war. it felt very fitting, and naturally, I had to go listen to the song on spotify after.
Aaa, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for playing. ♥♥♥ Oooh, and I didn't know that one! Now I'll have to listen to that song too, hehe. ♥ I'm using Erik Satie's Gnossienne; it's one of my faves!
Just played through the whole game and I Love It!!! Honestly it's such a wonderful story and world you're crafting here!! Keep up the beautiful work but of course take care of yourself as well <3 <3 <3
Seja como for vc está de parabéns!!!! Te desejo todo o sucesso do mundo e vou esperar por sua próxima história, tomara que seja da nossa mitologia... mudando de assunto, vai ter alguma versão em que se pode jogar como o rei deste jogo? Abraços!!!
Aaa, muito obrigadaaa! ^^♥ Eu trabalho bastante a mitologia Brasilieira nos meus livros, que se passam todos no Brasil (passado ou futuro)! Se você quiser dar uma olhada, estão todos aqui: https://www.wattpad.com/user/LigiaNunes E você não pode jogar como o Mathias, mas tenho algumas histórias curtas escritas no ponto de vista dele no meu Kofi, se estiver curioser! haha https://ko-fi.com/ligianunes
I love this game! The writing and pacing thus far is fantastic, and I adore how complicated the characters themselves are, as well as how complicated the relationships between characters are. I am patiently impatient while waiting for the next update!
I really enjoyed this story so far but i wonder if one of the early choice i made about me seeing Mathias as a friend instantly took away all the romantic chances. Would be a bummer if so since i didn't want to rush it lol.
Also is there a date where you plan on releasing the next chapter?
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I'm waaaaaay too invested in this and I want more!
Cara ficou incrível, direção de arte está ótima, e a escrita é praticamente perfeita, o mesmo vale pela escolha da trilha sonora, tudo combina perfeitamente, espero que todos envolvidos no projeto estejam orgulhosos, ficou lindo
Ohh, this was amazing. <3 Does someone know what the paths are? Initially, I played a sarcastic type of character, then a really sweet and insecure one and then a hardass that was obsessed with discipline.
I really love the writing! I was super immersed and invested in the attention to detail. I really, really love the amount of effort going into the choices feeling consistent and varied. I really love how the lore and the world building builds on top of each other without breaking the flow of the narrative. I absolutely love the grayscale coloring as well, my eyes were practically dancing over the designs in the background and characters. It's awesome.
im on the second chapter so far and im loving it but i cant stop laughing cuz 'mandra' is kinda like.. p\/ssy in russian. anyways! mathias is cute and i love that we can be pissed at him (also the way he kinda delivers if u keep provoking him in chap 1???? delicious)
ngl matt be funky flustered mess and then something happens and the only clear thought in my head is 'daddy is daddying' LIKE WHEN WE YELLED AND HE MADE US KNEEL after the nightmare??????????? DAYMN.
anyways i loved it, mattie is my fav so far, i didnt try other paths, the pictures and aesthetic are fire and im sending all love well wishes and hopes for the update!
I am in LOVE with this game!!!
loved playing this!! can't wait for the next chapter to be released!!!
So so good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just noticed a bug. After choosing my dragon commanders appearance in game, a short time later his appearance on the save menu where it usually shows is different from what I chose - he has a different nose & different jawline. Not sure why this happened?
Also, in the first part of the game, if you try to quicksave it gives an error and you need to rollback. Not sure at what point this stops but after Matt visits the dragon commander in their bedroom, the error no longer occurs.
Hi! Just wanted to report an error in the Windows version! It's during basically the first chapter, right after the talk with the Queen, the scene where you can help Mathias undress, it stops playing as this message pops up!
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/chapterOne.rpy", line 654, in script
label c1dulcereward:
File "game/chapterOne.rpy", line 654, in script
label c1dulcereward:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1427, in execute
screen notify(message):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1427, in execute
screen notify(message):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1432, in execute
frame at notify_appear:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 1433, in execute
text "{font=GrenzeGotisch.ttf}{size=20}[mn1][message!tq][mn2]{/size}{/font}"
NameError: Name 'mn1' is not defined.
For me, it kicked me out and asked how I'd like to open .txt files.
Hihi! It should be fixed now. Thank you for reporting the bug, and I hope you'll enjoy the update ♥
Hi! Thank you for letting me know ;) Fixing it right now. I'll let you know once I upload the new build!
All right! It should be fixed now ;D Please update to the newest build, it should be up any second now. I hope you'll enjoy the update! ♥♥♥
omg I'm so sad this isn't playable on my phone. I just wanted to say it looks like a wonderful project and the premise sounds so great! ♥️
Just did my first run and even created an account, so far I'm impressed. I'll try a few different choices later, but so far choices have been frequent, made sense for the characters and didn't leave me wanting for different options, I'm a bit bummed about not being able to tell on Mandra, but oh well...
I don't mind the black and white aesthetic and the frequent art shots (scenes or whatcha call it) mere then make up for the lack of colour. I do want to point out that the art style is quite charming.
All in all a great VN! But If I could ask one thing, MC has long hair cos of the queen, will we be able to at some point chooses to cut it? Idk why that's the thing I'd love to see, but it is.
I just finished my first run, now to play it like 3 more times.
So i had been playing this game for about 5 hours and there was this choice i couldnt get no matter how many different choices i get it was the 'Be obedient' and i couldnt press it cause my MC was always to proud any tips would be great or i might spend the whole week fixated on this
Hi! Thank you so much for playing the game! I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^^ That scene at the end of CH02 changes a little bit depending on your MC's archetype/personality. That option only appears to the Ruler archetype. It's supposed to be always locked to show that your MC just can't bring themself to be obedient to Mathias (yet) hehe ^^ <3 There are similar options in the other routes too, but for different aspects of the MC's personality. If you want to play other archetypes, you can get the Seeker archetype (sweeter MC) from the first choices in the menus, while the Destroyer (outspoken MC) options are often in the middle. Each archetype has a different ending in CH02. :3
This is such an amazing story, i was sooo invested!! no wait, I AM so invested!!! like seriously the characters are amazing, the story is super interesting, the art is georgous!
Thank you soo much for your amazing work!!
I WAS SO SHOCKED WHEN BACHG PLAYED> THE SPECIFIC SONG IS SPECIAL TO ME
I NEED MANDRA RIFGHT NOW
me too bestie me too TT
GAHHH IT WAS AMAZINGG
i really hope that the second part of chapter 3 comes out :0 IT WAS JUST ALL TOO GOOD AAAAHGGHGHAGHGDGHS i'm gonna go feral
it's a really nice change from all of the Visual Novels i see! the posibility of choosing how you feel of most things, the incredible artwork, the way the story is seriously unique, it's all just too amazing!! The extra story was great too!! I honestly hope to see a future update :)
thank you for this incredibe Visual Novel!!
I made an account just so I could leave a comment lol, I really love this game and the character's you've created! I'm so excited to see where this goes in the future (though I'm very new to using itch.io so I literally have no idea how to navigate this site lmao). I love all the LGBTQ+ representation too, super nice to see :)
I was pleasantly surprised when I heard Gnossienne in your wonderful work. You have chosen the music perfectly for the story. The storytelling style, musical accompaniment and graphic performance are all very sophisticated and harmonize perfectly. Thank You for sharing your amazing work.
This was such an amazing game! I just kinda wish Mandra was a possible love interest lol. I am so excited for the other chapters/updates! I love the story and the angst so far. Thank you devs for creating such a lovely game <33
Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥ And I do have plans for Mand after this game, so I'm extra glad you liked them so much. >8))) It's just me, one dev, though haha
Oh my god, i really hope you're resting then! Don't pressurize urself for games especially because its just you, really surprised bc its an amazing game and doing it all by yourself is an accomplishment 😭 Thank you again, and really?? I'm so happy about the plan for Mand :D
This was a fun play! I really enjoyed it. I got a good little kick out of the use of "Battle of Trees" - Tori Amos instramental during the flashback of the feast before the war. it felt very fitting, and naturally, I had to go listen to the song on spotify after.
Aaa, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for playing. ♥♥♥ Oooh, and I didn't know that one! Now I'll have to listen to that song too, hehe. ♥ I'm using Erik Satie's Gnossienne; it's one of my faves!
Just played through a bunch of times and absolutely love the game! I can't wait to see what's next! Amazing job dev <
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it <3
Just played through the whole game and I Love It!!! Honestly it's such a wonderful story and world you're crafting here!! Keep up the beautiful work but of course take care of yourself as well <3 <3 <3
You're so sweet, thank you so much! I'm super glad you enjoyed the game. <3
Mal comecei a jogar e já ouvi aquele sambinha tipo século 19 rs... como faço para a versão em português brazuka?
Hahaha ♥ assim que eu terminar o jogo e editar o texto eu vou fazer toda a tradução! ^^
Seja como for vc está de parabéns!!!! Te desejo todo o sucesso do mundo e vou esperar por sua próxima história, tomara que seja da nossa mitologia... mudando de assunto, vai ter alguma versão em que se pode jogar como o rei deste jogo? Abraços!!!
Aaa, muito obrigadaaa! ^^♥ Eu trabalho bastante a mitologia Brasilieira nos meus livros, que se passam todos no Brasil (passado ou futuro)! Se você quiser dar uma olhada, estão todos aqui: https://www.wattpad.com/user/LigiaNunes E você não pode jogar como o Mathias, mas tenho algumas histórias curtas escritas no ponto de vista dele no meu Kofi, se estiver curioser! haha https://ko-fi.com/ligianunes
Beijão!!
Muito legal!!! Parabéns!!!!
I love this game! The writing and pacing thus far is fantastic, and I adore how complicated the characters themselves are, as well as how complicated the relationships between characters are. I am patiently impatient while waiting for the next update!
I really enjoyed this story so far but i wonder if one of the early choice i made about me seeing Mathias as a friend instantly took away all the romantic chances. Would be a bummer if so since i didn't want to rush it lol.
Also is there a date where you plan on releasing the next chapter?